Portimations's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bobby and the Tree Ep1- Bobby's Diary]

This was more like a Powerpoint slideshow. Although it didn't show good animation aspects, I did like some of the facial expressions. May I recommend adobe flash($15 a month) or Toon Boom (FREE). These animation softwares are very good with animation, both have similar basic animation aspects with some different features. I will also subscribe to your channel, I would hopefully like to see you grow. :) Keep improving meng. ALSO, you can look up on YouTube basic tutorials for these programs, I recommend Draw with Jazza's tutorial on animate cc, it's slightly over an hour and it covers mostly EVERYTHING about animate cc. although complicated it might be to use these programs (took me a little over a month to get used to it), it's very effective and I highly recommend using them.

[Goku vs Majin buu]

ENGLISH: This was pretty funny, even though I don't speak a lot of Spanish, I laughed at some parts in this, but some things I saw you could improve were like when Goku's spirit bomb got kicked back, he had a different body shape, so I should say just be consistent with the character's body's. I also thought that you didn't use enough frames in your animation making it look sort of choppy. overall, good job though. keep improving.

ESPANOL: Esto fue bastante divertido, aunque no hablo mucho español, me reí en algunas partes de esto, pero algunas cosas que vi que podría mejorar eran como cuando la bomba de espíritu de Goku fue expulsado, tenía una forma de cuerpo diferente, Así que debería decir simplemente ser coherente con el cuerpo del personaje. También pensé que no utilizaste suficientes marcos en tu animación haciendo que parezca un poco agitado. En general, buen trabajo. sigue mejorando.

[SpongeBob's confession.]

I probably laughed way to hard at this lol. Very good animation and art, and good lip sync to idubbztv "I'm gay".

Rakijave responds:

Thank you bro, this is my second animation, so the next ones are going to be even better :D
And, actually, I didn't make the background and the characters. They are original from the TV series, but I layered them up in photoshop.

[Night of Knight: My first animation project]

This was pretty good for your first animation, I suggest creating construction lines to help draw your characters when animating so it doesn't look as choppy, and also adding more key frames to make inbetweens to improve that as well. I might also suggest looking up more sound effects, or recording your own. And one last thing, you didn't have enough show time for certain scenes, and it made it look like it jumped around a lot. Overall, you did good, just keep improving.

Personally, I learned from Chris O'neill (OneyNG) on how to animate, and he does a very good job at demonstrating basic animating skills with some comedy on adobe flash. I may also recommend draw with jazza (he has a 1.3 hour long video explaining EVERYTHING about animate cc). These are very good artist/animators to learn and look up to. Good luck.

drmadvanfusion responds:

Thank you for the advice

[The short show: I like baby's]

Pros:
Great Intro
Awesome/fluid Animation
Very funny
Appealing art
Funny ending

Cons:
The angle of his body which he was walking didn't have the right tween direction

That's the only thing I found wrong with it, its a great short cartoon, and it appealed to my weird/dark sense of humor. Great job.

[[Animation test] Goku SSJ God]

Just like jonthomson had said, use dumping grounds for unfinished products, but, I do say the color change was really cool, but the animation can use some work, as in adding more in-betweens with goku moving his hand down to his hip, and also adding aesthetics like his ki riffling his belt as he powers up. I would also recommend making his legs skinnier and putting wrinkles in his bottom part of his gi so his legs don't look like orange marshmallows lol. anyways, good job, and keep improving.

cvillart responds:

hehehe thank you so much. I will post an update, I hope you see it and tell me your opinion to improve as artist :) thank you so much.

[Umbrella vs Zed]

I suggest improving your camera angles and zooming in techniques, and add voice acting and more music and sound effects. there was sort of of a lame story, but I can tell time and effort was put into it. If you continue to use dialogue for as your voice acting replacement, I also suggest making sure there are no spelling errors. The animation was a little sloppy as well, but Overall, I give it a 2.

[Nightmare Coco! Tales from the Crossing]

I really liked the facial expressions. The whole story was pretty good, and it created a nice and creepy atmosphere. The ending was especially good as well. The art was excellent, but the animation can be improved. Overall, it was an entertaining watch.