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[Rabbit Hopin']

unfinished projects should be put in the dumping grounds, but I should say that you should have the rabbit hop and when it gets in the air, kind of slow down, then come down, faster and faster, demonstrating proper physics.

unclegarbear responds:

This is an finished project. I did this just for fun. Thanks for giving me some advice though.

[Goku vs Beerus [WIP] - 4 Way Sprite Animation Contest]

Cool animation, but nothing happens at the end, almost like if it's unfinished. but definitely cool effects and animation though.

Demahu responds:

Its a work in progress, or [WIP].

[SpongeBob's confession.]

I probably laughed way to hard at this lol. Very good animation and art, and good lip sync to idubbztv "I'm gay".

Rakijave responds:

Thank you bro, this is my second animation, so the next ones are going to be even better :D
And, actually, I didn't make the background and the characters. They are original from the TV series, but I layered them up in photoshop.

[Night of Knight: My first animation project]

This was pretty good for your first animation, I suggest creating construction lines to help draw your characters when animating so it doesn't look as choppy, and also adding more key frames to make inbetweens to improve that as well. I might also suggest looking up more sound effects, or recording your own. And one last thing, you didn't have enough show time for certain scenes, and it made it look like it jumped around a lot. Overall, you did good, just keep improving.

Personally, I learned from Chris O'neill (OneyNG) on how to animate, and he does a very good job at demonstrating basic animating skills with some comedy on adobe flash. I may also recommend draw with jazza (he has a 1.3 hour long video explaining EVERYTHING about animate cc). These are very good artist/animators to learn and look up to. Good luck.

drmadvanfusion responds:

Thank you for the advice

[[Animation test] Goku SSJ God]

Just like jonthomson had said, use dumping grounds for unfinished products, but, I do say the color change was really cool, but the animation can use some work, as in adding more in-betweens with goku moving his hand down to his hip, and also adding aesthetics like his ki riffling his belt as he powers up. I would also recommend making his legs skinnier and putting wrinkles in his bottom part of his gi so his legs don't look like orange marshmallows lol. anyways, good job, and keep improving.

cvillart responds:

hehehe thank you so much. I will post an update, I hope you see it and tell me your opinion to improve as artist :) thank you so much.